User talk:Greenman

Are you here to talk about a Draft that was declined? Please rather post as a comment on the Draft talk page, where other reviewers can see as well, or use the resources on the decline notice. I spend limited time on reviewing new articles, so may not personally be the next person to review the submission. Greenman (talk) 21:20, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Greenman. After reviewing what I wrote, I believe it was fairly neutral as I was stating a true fact about the team. Them having four World Cup wins (more than any other nation) would classify them as the greatest rugby nation of all time. I believe you taking it down is a mistake and that what I had wrote is fair and doesn't go against the neutral act.

Please get back to me ASAP. Joshisakov (talk) 07:35, 20 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

South Africa national rugby union team Joshisakov (talk) 07:35, 20 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Howsit. Thank you, I am learning how this process works still. I assure you that myself do not have a COI in this matter. Although I have spoken to him (DE KOCK), and aware that he is 75, I am also aware of the entirety of the surroundings regarding his past life, much less his new life or even that he was released recently on parole. I have here in front of me physically:

1. Anemari Jansen - Eugene de Kock - Assassin for the State - Tafelberg Publishers - ISBN 978-0-624-07027-6

2. Jeremy Gordon - Eugene de Kock - A long night's DAMAGE - Contra Press - ISBN 0-620-22198-4

3. Jacques Pauw - In the heart of the whore - Southern Book Publishers - ISBN 1-86812-392-8

First book is the best and three being the worst.

Those are the three physically published books I have in my possession on C10 / DE KOCK.

The TRC Report can be downloaded from here:

https://www.justice.gov.za/trc/report/

De Kock is mentioned in some of the TRC reports, which also contains materials from the TRC video series of 536 videos:

https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLjxBjEglO5y__cA4kIlo2lJE1Bsi8Ysqr

(Personally have watched every video once, at least, some in excess of 20-30 times).

Many other relevant online sources exist, like O'Malleys Foundation and Mandela Organisation, Chris Hani Foundation and all of them of relatively the same information.

The books provide you different perspectives.

The online materials and TRC then another perspective.

Then there are the court cases, to which almost all the records are sealed, which is strange as it is supposed to be public information unless a ruling is made, which, if you try to find those records, are not there. You do however obtain some strings of incormation regarding the proceedings.

Then most interesting enough there are mentions of DEKOCK on Wikileaks:

https://search.wikileaks.org/?q=%22eugene+de+kock%22

Which makes him a significant in the eyes of the intelligence community.

One last thing, it is according to my understanding, common knowledge amongst most people in that I can reasonable accept that a majority of yourselves are aware that the media does not always tell the truth and often when they do tell the truth, only a half of it. Per example, did ANYONE believe WION with their moon landing video material that looks like a 90's SEGA game footage.

20/20 vision regarding the world is only foudn in hindsight. Now that so many years have passed and new information comes to light as an avid reader of the bushwar and collector of memoribilia from this era, and during these sessions learned about DEKOCK from another angle, one that presents a perspective directly from his colleagues who some people considered to be "underneath" the rest of them and wont be called to testify. To be clear and frank, if the Black African male soldiers/operators/policemen that served under the DEKOCK would have been allowed to testify for him, one would have been able to question the narrative at the during 1995.

"I am no racist" Says DE KOCK:

https://www.justice.gov.za/trc/media/1997/9709/s970929e.htm

Of course my immediate thought was how this could be the case, or what exactly does it mean, as it is was understood that the time that DE KOCK is a smart individual with above average intelligence, could mean by that. Well, that is the thing - when you understand what he means, and look at his friends from his early years during MANDATORY service to the state, they were same men that served under him.

I looked for what each of those Black African men said about him under his command and took some time, however I understood that DE KOCK is not a racist because a racist wont sleep next someone he hates and despise, nor try to save his life even when his own life is under threat. That makes no sense to me, because you are either racist or not, or is there a halfway racist in between? Then probably every person in the world must have some form racism because I can think of every nation in the world at least not liking some other nation which is different from them.

De Kock practically slept, ate and showered with his African Black soldiers/operators. That doesnt sound like a racist to me, to be honest and some of the stories also does not speak of "pure black hatred". If you mention De Kock to any former African Black African Koevoet, they immediately get excited and ask about their brother.

What I do know now, is that I can see a witchhunt when I see one, and practically only DE KOCK and WALUSZ were severely jailed after failed promises that they would not be jailed if they go to the TRC. So the last question why, or what, made DE KOCK and WALUSZ so special that they were exempted from the TRC promises of pardon. It got my attention recently. Suidafrikaanse verwer (talk) 11:53, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Greenman,

I changed the article 4 times now, I added a bunch of independent, reliable sources and it's still an advertisement? Can you say which parts are not neutrally written? There is the history (that's just stating facts), what we offer (that's the core of every company) and the IPO (which again, are facts).

It's not because I'm an employee of the company, that I want to write an advertisement. We're a listed company on the Belgian stockmarket so we should have a Wikipedia page just to explain who we are.

Thanks for sharing the insights so I can get this article online.

Eva Eva Verplaetse (talk) 07:57, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Greenman, please take a look at this draft (which you declined for want of reliable sources. I think you should be vast in knowing independent reliable media news outlets or journals in Nigeria based on your experience so far on the English Wikipedia. More than 20 reliable sources were cited in this draft https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Adedoyin_Adeleke especially in the "Publications" part. Please make me understand more the reason for decline. Guide me the more. You are more like mentor now. Thank you. Frankincense Diala (talk) 05:14, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Greenman I'm sorry that my draft for Jane Fine was declined. I thought I'd included enough references, including for the birth date. Do you think that there should be more footnotes? I've written Wikipedia pages before, but on another account. Just wanted to clarify because maybe some protocols have changed since I last wrote a page? Thanks. ChurroCat (talk) 18:13, 13 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @ChurroCat: For example the entire teaching section is unsourced, and the awards section only has one source. Greenman (talk) 21:34, 13 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Greenman I will leave this comment on the Talk page for Jane Fine, but I've added a reference to nearly every sentence, so I think that the page should be ready to be checked again (by you or any other qualified editor). ChurroCat (talk) 14:19, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Greenman. I'm Segun Animashaun from Nigeria. You reviewed my article on Fledgeling Nigerian Fashion Designer Toju Foyeh (https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Draft:Toju_Foyeh&oldid=1234025815). Your review and the subsequent comments and suggestions were extremely helpful as it served as a tool of knowledge that will and indeed already has begun perfecting my foray into article writing. who knows i may sometime be a reviewer just like you and if im lucky, steal your job.

That being said i will like you to know that i have addressed all the things that you pointed out in my article and will like you to check it for a re-review.

Thanks and have a wonderful 4th Quarter. Segunaniman (talk) 12:26, 16 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Bro you have to accept the draft Youssef khedhri 2011 (talk) 14:38, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Greenman. I'm Segun Animashaun from Nigeria. You reviewed my article on Fledgeling Nigerian Fashion Designer Toju Foyeh (https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Draft:Toju_Foyeh&oldid=1234025815). Your review and the subsequent comments and suggestions were extremely helpful as it served as a tool of knowledge that will and indeed already has begun perfecting my foray into article writing. who knows i may sometime be a reviewer just like you and if im lucky, steal your job.

That being said i will like you to know that i have addressed all the things that you pointed out in my article and will like you to check it for a re-review.

Thanks and have a wonderful 4th Quarter.

Tot siens! Segunaniman (talk) 12:19, 16 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Greenman. I'm Segun Animashaun from Nigeria.

You reviewed my article on Fledgeling Nigerian Fashion Designer Toju Foyeh (https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Draft:Toju_Foyeh&oldid=1234025815).

i have addressed all the things that you pointed out in my article and will like you to check it for a re-review.

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Thanks and have a wonderful 4th Quarter.

Tot siens! Segunaniman (talk) 15:10, 17 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Greenman, thanks for the insights on my draft ( Draft:Alice Amin Siman Israel )

I've corrected them. I'll be very gratefull if you reviewed my draft. Techxpertgirl (talk) 17:38, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Greenman

Could you please review the article? Draft:Saritha_Kukku I believe that I have provided or cited potential links to the article from a reliable source. I tried to provide as many links as I could. Mustafdesam (talk) 05:30, 7 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Greenman!

Could you please help to understand how can I fix this - "All statements need to be sourced, starting with the date of birth" - Looks like my sources not correct? And how can I sources date of birth?

"Duplication should also be removed" - I got it, this is glitch, very strange!)

Thank you!|

Alona Alona Mashevska (talk) 05:52, 8 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Alona Mashevska:, I can't help you find a source for the date of birth, but then how did you get the date of birth in the first place? If you have a WP:COI, you must state it. Greenman (talk) 07:28, 8 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I got it. Sure, working on it!))

Thank you! Alona Mashevska (talk) 22:41, 8 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

How do i request approval of my article? You have suggested that i should link with the LGBTQ rights in Kenya, but i dont think the two articles will be congruent. Mike-Nairobi (talk) 14:50, 17 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Greenman, thank you for reviewing my draft. You mentioned that the source for the DOB is missing - this is information I have directly received from the person I wrote the bio about - how should I cite it? Faliyahya (talk) 13:33, 7 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Faliyahya: see Wikipedia:Verifiability. If there is no accessible and reliable published source, the information should not be included. Greenman (talk) 13:51, 7 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you so much for your quick reply! Faliyahya (talk) 14:00, 7 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I just don't understand why since I have provided plenty of independent source. I have notice some pages with only two or three lines and even without proper source but they are still on Wikipedia, but for Thoeun Theara, there are many sources provided. You can also publish it and leave a note just like you do for many other articles so that other reviewers can help improve it. Mao Piseth 16:59, 5 November 2023 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Pisethinfo (talk • contribs)

In response to your 'marketing nonsense' comment on my first ever submission, WP:FAITH and WP:BITE. I am still learning and currently trying to make improvements. Fifi Dee 23 (talk)

can you help me understanding problem with my draft i am having trouble understanding problem with it can you please help me out a bit Shashwat185 (talk) 20:14, 6 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Can you help me understand what's Wrong with my draft and how m posed to submit my draft VioletKay.in (talk) 19:10, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Greenman, You recently declined a Wikipedia entry of mine (Draft:Rockcastle County High School) stating that there weren't enough citations, but since Rockcastle County High School is rural, the only major sources that are available are the District website, the School website, NCES, and US News. J.A. (talk) 02:40, 22 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I added more information to my draft. It says review pending but when I was talking to someone on talk it said that a re review wouldn’t be possible. Can you tell me if the draft will be approved and considered Arjun Dugar 2204 (talk) 13:20, 23 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The wiki draft is Draft:Aditi Dugar Arjun Dugar 2204 (talk) 13:21, 23 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Arjun Dugar 2204 your draft has been Rejected and therefore will not be considered further. You have not shown that Aditi Dugar meets the Wikipedia:Notability (people) threshhold, therefore they cannot have a Wikipedia article at this time. Qcne (talk) 15:36, 23 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your review. I removed some of the extra references. But in editing, I produced another error that I can't seem to fix. The first intro phrase of the draft does not show and has an error message. This is how it should begin: "Rosemarie Scolaro Moser is an American neuropsychologist^[1]," Can you help? Otherwise, it is ready for another review. Thank you! SportsNeuropsychology100 (talk) 15:37, 11 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Greenman, I am trying to better understand the comments you made when rejecting my draft (Draft:Uri Shraga Gutman). I dont know how to reference an objective source for a date of birth of my subject (a living person) other than uploading their passport or birth-certificate (which are the sources that I have seen), without breaching privacy laws and regulations. If you have some idea for how I can do this otherwise, can you please suggest? Additionally, I have referenced all that I can from online sources. I do have some "hard-copy" references (newspaper articles, for example, from the 1990s and early 2000s) - but I have not found these online, and therefore could not provide a reference to them for the article. Can you suggest a solution for this? Many thanks for your comments, and in advance for your help. Avggtmn (talk) 05:26, 26 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Offline sources can be used, they are just not preferred, as they are difficult to verify. Please don't upload personal information, such as passport details! If you cannot find independent sources, then the information should rather be removed. Greenman (talk) 13:48, 27 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Greenman, In many entries about living people, there is a date of birth, which is not referenced. Please note the very similar wikipedia entries for other diplomats/ambassadors (see example: Rafael Harpaz - Wikipedia). Can you suggest an alternative? For example, it is my understanding that LinkedIN is not considered a reliable source. What is, then? Avggtmn (talk) 06:07, 3 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Avggtmn: that article is atrociously sourced, and much of the content is vulnerable to being removed. See WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS. Linkedin is considered a poor source in most contexts as it's self-published, but for a date of birth for an authenticated subject, Linkedin could be usable. See WP:LINKEDIN.Greenman (talk) 21:28, 3 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Greenman,

Can you please explain why this is considered conflict of interest? 2607:FEA8:86A0:800:E9BF:998D:C2F2:2F69 (talk) 22:05, 26 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Greenman,

Can you please clarify why this entry is considered a conflict of interest? It is still listed as "pending" so not sure what the status is. Any clarification about next steps would be appreciated. Thank you! Erezze (talk) 11:37, 27 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I cannot say why it is COI, that is for the declarer to do. Since the writer mentions having seen their passport/birth-certificate, there is almost certainly a close relationship. Greenman (talk) 13:48, 27 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I am the writer and there is absolutely no mention of her birth-certificate, passport or country of origin/residence. So I'm not sure what you're referring to. The entry is still pending but you recommended reading the COI document -- it is still unclear as to why. 24.44.146.59 (talk) 16:59, 28 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

About one month ago I invested a lot of time to add substantial content, references, sources etc. to this article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft_talk:Alternative_Alternatives

Alternative Alternatives are a concept that is increasingly becoming more relevant.

I hope that you or someone who is well versed in Finance and Investment is taking a look and can approve the article or give feedback!

Thank you! Francoise99 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Francoise99x (talk • contribs) 07:56, 10 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

You rejected a page I created https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Bruce_Ryan_(production_designer)

You wrote that "This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources." This is just plain wrong! Perhaps you were looking at an earlier draft which had sources Wikipedia considers unreliable. I removed all such sources from the version you claim to have reviewed. The article cites only reliable sources. Please retract your declination. Thank you. Sylvan1971 (talk) 02:29, 1 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I still see entire sections that are unsourced.Greenman (talk) 12:23, 1 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

With all due respect, the sections that are unsourced (birthplace, family background, high school and college, are customarily unsourced in Wikipedia. See, for example https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Donald_Trump or https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Joe_Biden etc. You may be applying non-standard standards.

The subject's career is entirely sourced with reliable sources. If you have specific objections, please provide. Thank you. Sylvan1971 (talk) 16:00, 3 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

My friend, you have declined to publish my page of living person. Your reason was that there were too few citations but I see many published pages that have much fewer citations than mine.

For example: Zandaakhüügiin Enkhbold, Norovyn Altankhuyag, Mendsaikhany Enkhsaikhan and Radnaasümbereliin Gonchigdorj. I also used citations from international organizations and currently operational organizations if you need to verify.

Can you please take a look and try to publish my page next time? Thank you Wiseone019 14:23, 30 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Leopoldo_Balayon_III

Great feedback @Greenman The "accomplishments" section was edited to your recommendations and the references were properly added. Great job @Greenman Days Gone Smart (talk) 05:58, 21 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

You rejected a page I created https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Segun_Nabi Realdbeat (talk) 01:44, 11 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

== You rejected a page I created ==

Hello Admin,

Draft: Musa Muhammed Olayinka

You wrote that "Sources are poor, and some appear to be about an entirely different person. " This is just plain wrong! Perhaps you were looking at an earlier draft which had sources Wikipedia considers unreliable. I removed all such sources from the version you claim to have reviewed. The article cites only reliable sources. Please retract your declination.

Thank you. Ishola Ishola0 (talk) 21:23, 27 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Greenman, I just want to publish a wikipedia page for this company, as it's already existing in Arabic language.

https://ar.wikipedia.org/wiki/%D8%A8%D8%B1%D9%88%D8%A8%D8%B1%D8%AA%D9%8A_%D9%81%D8%A7%D9%8A%D9%86%D8%AF%D8%B1

Can you please help? Mahmoudnessim912 (talk) 05:46, 3 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Page rejection

To User:Greenman ,You rejected a page I edited, Draft:Tektite Industries You wrote that "This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources." Perhaps you were looking at an earlier draft which had sources Wikipedia considers unreliable. I removed all such sources from the version you claim to have reviewed. The article cites only reliable sources from government, news media, references to other Wikipedia pages. Please retract your declination. Thank you. TEKTITE1 (talk) 15:56, 10 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@TEKTITE1: Please read the guidelines for references, the page is far from suitably sourced. I note you have also been blocked for promotional editing. Greenman (talk) 07:50, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

You declined my article saying the subject does not qualify for the Wikipedia article. There is already a German Wikipedia version of him so I guess the English one should qualify too. I have added now seven new references (plus the four previous ones still there) and wrote more information in his bio. I have seen many many other pages with less references and far less written information in the article, and being published. Syvä-äksy (talk) 10:18, 25 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Syvä-äksy: I don't know which page you mean (it's better to comment on your Draft where the next reviewer will see it), but note that the English Wikipedia has its own notability guidelines (linked from the decline notice), and that WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS is not a basis for approving a submission. Greenman (talk) 10:38, 25 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Ok. I mean this Draft:Otso Liimatta. Syvä-äksy (talk) 11:55, 25 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Greenman! I'm not new to Wikipedia, I've read A LOT of articles, but I wanted to make my own article. So I decided to make mines about Shadow the Hedgehog's first voice actor, David Humphrey. But I know I don't have a lot of sources but can you please tell me how to improve? Thanks! Draft:David Humphrey (voice actor)

-Unknown Person 2603:7000:C53D:B386:E006:3E59:FE13:4925 (talk) 11:47, 3 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Greenman, Adding links and all are legit and have a similarity to other articles. More references will submit soon. JackW2016 (talk) 18:10, 12 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

== You left a note on a page I created ==

Hello Greeman,

Draft:Gray_Leadbetter

You wrote that "All statements need to be sourced, starting with the date of birth." I have updated the article to only cite fact verified statements backed by sources. The article cites reliable sources. Would you be willing to give it another look and help me push this through to final publication?

Thank you. Manderson619 14:31, 22 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

== Note about birthday date (Mohamed Elshahat) ==My source for his birthday is him. I declared COI on my page since I personally know him. Should I only leave the year since it appears in most of his bios online?. Thanks! NourhanAbdelfattah (talk) 14:00, 23 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @NourhanAbdelfattah: yes, personal word-of-mouth is insufficient to use as a source, so stick with what the sources say. Greenman (talk) 17:28, 23 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! I edited the DOB and only left the year. NourhanAbdelfattah (talk) 17:35, 23 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. I have a comment from you that the draft of 11.11.11 was rejected. I'm not sure why I've been sent this - it's not my article and I don't even recognise it. --Irrevenant [ talk ] 03:30, 3 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The page history says otherwise, although it was back in 2011, so understandable you've forgotten :) Greenman (talk) 06:52, 3 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

About the draft of Axis of Coordinates Play

Greetings, the publication of this play is prohibited in Iran and no publication can review it. Although there is a lot of discussion about it in private circles. Therefore, the stipulated conditions are not possible to satisfy. Artaxerex (talk) 00:35, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Arrowiz

Hi Greenman, may I have more information about why you've declined my draft? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vingame (talk • contribs) 01:10, 6 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:NCOR

Hi Greenman, you've declined my draft (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:NCOR) citing an undeclared COI. Fair point; is it sufficient that I declare the COI on my user page (which I've now done)? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Crayon Logic (talk • contribs) 01:17, 4 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

PinePhone Pro

You requested a redirect be deleted to accept this draft two weeks ago but never followed through. * Pppery * _{it has begun...} 04:39, 23 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks @Pppery: no one had let me know till now. I've approved the draft. Greenman (talk) 07:37, 23 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Move

Hello. I tried to move Hurricane Orlene (2022) the redirect to the draft. Not sure if it worked or not. Hurricane Chandler (talk) 12:23, 23 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:List of Tibetan to English Translations

I am completely unaware of what did I do to change "reject" into "decline" as you point out, I actually don't know what the difference between reject and decline means in wikipedia, and didn't mean to waste your time, I'm sorry about that: "Also pointing out that the submitter edited the previous reject into a decline in order to resubmit. Please don't waste reviewer's time like this. Greenman (talk) 13:49, 13 October 2022 (UTC)" 108Sam (talk) 10:37, 24 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Darwin Del Fabro

Hello Greenman I recently created Draft:Darwin Del Fabro, a biography about a Brazilian singer/actor. You had recently reviewed and accepted my article on Lamor Whitehead so I figured I would reach out. Would you be kind enough to take a look and let me know how the article could be improved? Or, if it looks ok, to move it to the mainspace? Thank you in advance for your help and consideration. Volcom95 (talk) 20:38, 25 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Draft: Anna Pasternak

Hello Admin,

I have fixed the issues on Draft:Anna Pasternak. Please check again. Thank you. Forgetwords (talk) 01:02, 30 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Disambiguation link notification for November 4

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Draft:Jerald Hage

That wasn't really my submission. Another user had moved it from Draft space to Article space. I moved it back and put the Afc submission tag on top. - UtherSRG (talk) 11:09, 5 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 19:46:09, 8 November 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by Swmpz

Swmpz (talk · contribs)
- Draft:The Bazaar (video game) (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

I am unsure of why the article I wrote got declined for COI. I would like some guidance to improve it or to know where it is considered COI.

Hi, I just wanted to get some guidance/explanation on the article I wrote that got declined for COI. I am unsure of why the article is considered COI and would appreciate an explanation as I don't fully understand.

Thanks. Swmpz (talk) 19:46, 8 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, the article was declined for notability reasons. The WP:COI message was to alert you to take note of the COI guidelines where applicable. Greenman (talk) 14:34, 10 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:2022 CBLC

Hello.I have read your reason for declining my draft(Draft:2022 Carling Black Label Cup)on the comments section you wrote and have added some citations.please review It and give me the feedback so that I can fix it before the 12th of November. Greg (talk) 15:20, 10 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Jack Mizzi

Is there anything I can do to fix this article please? ATM622 (talk) 17:37, 10 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

You remarked "WP:CHESS". What do you mean exactly? ATM622 (talk) 17:41, 10 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Follow the link to read what is meant: WP:CHESS. - UtherSRG (talk) 19:34, 10 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

There is nothing I didn't consider. What do you mean? ATM622 (talk) 21:47, 11 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Apologies, I should have used WP:NCHESS to be more specific. Greenman (talk) 21:53, 11 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I refer to WP:NCHESS

"2. Has participated in a World Chess Championship, Women's World Chess Championship or Chess World Cup."

As outlined in the references, Mizzi has participated in World Youth Chess Championship (aka World Cup). https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Jack_Mizzi#World_Youth_Chess_Championships_2022 including a reference to Wikipedia outlining these World CHESS Championships. ATM622 (talk) 07:34, 12 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

"Failure to meet these criteria does not mean an article must be deleted" - also please consider the increased media mention if the last months where all the local Malta media put headline articles with his name. I put all references I could find. ATM622 (talk) 07:42, 12 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I added the below sentence in the introduction to give prominence to the World Chess Championships.

Mizzi participated in the World Youth Chess Championships in Romania 2022[4]. ATM622 (talk) 07:53, 12 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Finally, please note that https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_Junior_Chess_Championship is listed in the Wikipedia World CHESS Championships. ATM622 (talk) 08:00, 12 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Also point 3, speaks of National Championships. Mizzi is the u20 Junior National Champion of Malta. ATM622 (talk) 19:47, 12 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Recently Mizzi has been awarded the Blitz National Champion title and the Rapid National Champion title. Note that these were the Malta National Championships and not Junior Championships. ATM622 (talk) 23:39, 8 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for writing back

Hi Greenman, I actually recreated the Wikipedia page after it was first declined on Sept 13, 2022. It's pending since two months, I saw that you have reviewed some drafts so If it's ok can you take a look? Draft:Aneesa Sharif Saddique IntelisMust (talk) 17:05, 14 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Nomination of Xhosa Wikipedia for deletion

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A thought about AFC

I came here via one of the drafts you declined (mainly to see what the creator had asked you here) and noticed that you have not responded to hardly any of them. While I do recognise that many of them are simply requests to re-review a draft (which I agree is best left to a new reviewer) you should at least reply to them as such; your banner is not sufficient excuse to essentially ignore everyone. Please consider responding, even if it is just to point them to WP:AFCHD or that you are not going to re-review the draft. Thanks. Primefac (talk) 17:19, 15 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Buddhism in Spain

Hi, you accepted Draft:Buddhism in Spain for the mainspace. A bit strange, as none of the issues I raised on the talk page when I moved it to draft previously had been addressed (just like many other issues weren't considered, e.g. the number/percentage mismatch in the infobox). Please don't put such terrible articles in the mainspace. Fram (talk) 12:18, 2 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

See WP:AFCPURPOSE. This in my opinion is a fairly clearcut case of an article that would survive WP:AFD. The issues you have raised can be tagged, fixed, removed as appropriate, but are not sufficient reason to decline the submission. Greenman (talk) 12:45, 2 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Have you actually looked at the flowchart? An article which isn't reliably sourced should be declined. I have highlighted serious issues with sources not supporting the claims they accompany. Even without those, I wonder why one would deliberately put gibberish and incorrect claims in the mainspace in the first place. "Surviving AfD" just means "the topic is notable" (and not copyvio or attack page, which would require deletion in draft as well), AfC review requires a bit more than that. The very, very least one could expect a reviewer to do is check the issues which lead to draftification in the first place, but I doubt you actually looked at the talk page when reviewing. Fram (talk) 13:42, 2 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Let's, as an example, look at the intro to the article: "Buddhism (Spanish: Budismo) is the one of the largest religions in Spain. The presence of Buddhism in Spain began in the late 1970s, brought from other parts of Europe, especially France. Despite its short history in the country, Buddhism was recognized as a deep-rooted religious confession in 2007, under official consideration. This recognition implies its comparison with most established religions for legal, political and administrative purposes." Ignoring that we get a grammatical error after just three words: this paragrapgh (of just the last sentence, who knows?) is sourced to [1], which verifies nothing at all in this paragraph.

Not an exception with this article, sadly: the first sentence of the history section is "The Spanish came into contact with Japanese Buddhists in the 16th century when some Jesuit missionaries settled in Japan and China." This is sourced to this, but surprise, that article doesn't mention China, Japan, Jesuits or missionaries, nor the 16th century.

Need I go on? Or will you accept that you perhaps botched this one, and remove your explanation from the top of the draft? I can add my explanation there as well if you prefer. Fram (talk) 13:51, 2 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Anthony & Cleopatra comment

Kia ora Greenman - I just wanted to check regarding your comment on Draft:Antony and Cleopatra (2022 opera) as to what you'd seen to make you think there was a COI? I'm reviewing it again now and couldn't see anything, but wanted to make sure I wasn't missing anything. Turnagra (talk) 21:07, 6 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Draft Matthew Iduoriyekemwen

Hi @Greenman,

Thanks for taking the time out to review my draft on Matthew Iduoriyekemwen. You left the comment that "Numerous statements are unsourced". I believe your review is unfair as this is an article on a person who was a member of a state legislature in a third world nation at a time of low internet penetration meaning there is naturally a limited number of online sources which can be referenced on the individual at this time. I believe it would be unfair to exclude significant information on the grounds that statements are unsourced seeing as it would end up providing barely an information on the individual to the user. Also, there are numerous articles on Wikipedia with many statements unsourced. For context internet penetration in the year 2000 in Nigeria was 0.06% and in 2007 when he left office was 6.77% (Nigerian: internet penetration). This means generally information on notable people from Nigeria from that era is generally limited on the internet especially when they are part of subnational governments. I'd urge you to reconsider your review on this as it is quite difficult to gauge the notability of a sub national govt official from Nigeria active in early internet era.

However if you still disagree, could you please point me to the statements you believe absolutely require an online source to have them removed from the article. I do think this takes away the benefit of the article as should any information on the article be contested, future readers will be welcome to edit the page and counter accordingly Hayfiz (talk) 09:08, 27 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Replied on Draft talk:Matthew Iduoriyekemwen. Greenman (talk) 10:00, 27 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Honorifics

You flagged improper honorifics in the Leadership section of Draft:Krach Institute for Tech Diplomacy at Purdue. That section has been removed. Lenkho (talk) 13:34, 6 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Rita Flynn

Hi @Greenman:,

could you please review this draft for American actress Rita Flynn? 186.188.178.109 (talk) 15:28, 19 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Gondwana Collection Namibia

Dear @Greenman, this is the very first article I've written and since Gondwana is the largest privately-owned tourism company in Namibia (where I live), I thought it would be a good place to start and I based a lot of the format on the TUI Group page. Would you give me some advice on how to improve it further? I removed all sections that I could understand that I thought seemed a bit more like a sales pitch than an encyclopedia article (based on your feedback), but when it comes to Namibia as a whole, apart from local newspapers and a few external tourism sites and blogs, it's quite difficult to reference facts.

As a Namibian, I think it's important for us to be on the map for more than just the basics, so I had a few articles in mind, but now that the first one has been rejected, I would love some pointers on how to overcome objections like quoting the source (their website) when very little other online references exist.

As mentioned, for inspiration, I looked at the TUI group and their website is referenced quite regularly, which is why I assumed the latter would be okay when it came to basic facts and then news updates and articles would be perfect for any further expansion, but what if even the basic facts like what a company does is not referred to online as more than a casual mention?

I would honestly love to learn from an actual contributor, since I read all the important documentation, but Namibia is often left untouched in even these areas. If I had to write about Sun International, it's already so much easier because the world writes about them, but in my journey to put us on the map, I find that, except for tourists who write blogs on the country, we have very little to reference.

Any suggestions? Anit006 (talk) 14:45, 27 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

talk page lurking... @Anit006: Wikipedia is not about helping organizations to be on the map. We are an encyclopedia and have certain standards. One of the foremost of those is that each article must pass the notability criteria. As a good rule of thumb, you can use the golden rule to check if the references you are using support the article or draft's assertion of notability. Drafts that do not meet the requirements for notability will not be accepted as new articles. - UtherSRG (talk) 16:37, 27 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@UtherSRG - I didn't say the organisation should be on the map, I said our country should be on the map and I wrote the article as part of a project for my school. The idea was to write an article that would assist in the travel and tourism industry and is Namibia-specific. I'm just trying to figure out where the balance is, because the info online is limited. Anit006 (talk) 06:03, 28 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

To assist in the travel and tourism industry ISNOT a part of Wikipedia's purpose. - UtherSRG (talk) 12:21, 28 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Dispute resolution

I have filed a dispute resolution regarding the Springbar page you rejected.

{{subst:drn-notice}} Xlea Nollmav (talk) 15:42, 3 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 12:02:12, 6 March 2023 for assistance on AfC submission by Walnuthillstreet

Walnuthillstreet (talk · contribs)
- Draft:Tom Musca (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

i really need some guidance ss to why my sources are not acceptable and this entry is rejected as my subject's colleagues have been published with equivalent or less sourcing , i have publications including new york times variety sun sentinel and libary of cogress that either quote or talk about the subject in detail, discuss the significance or his work and links that show his role on each project as well as sources that establish the subject has been personally cited for receiving awards and recognition of many films. If its time to give up on this i understand but it its a matter of me doing it incorrectly please advise.

Walnuthillstreet (talk) 12:02, 6 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Walnuthillstreet:, the existence of other poorly-sourced articles is not a reason for something to be published/avoid deletion. See WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS. If you wish to continue, the best advice is to address the concerns raised with your submission. The unsourced statements should be removed or sourced. Greenman (talk) 17:03, 6 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

absolutely understood and that is understood but i am wondering what would be considered unsourced, could you provide an example? Because i believe that there are at least three well-sourced articles (which fit the criteria for inclusion) if i remove everything else does that work? or is it a matter of not having enough well-sourced articles? I very much appreciate your guidance and thanks Walnuthillstreet (talk) 17:14, 6 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

An unsourced statement is a statement that cannot be verified because it is not followed by a source. For example, the entire education section, or "He is a frequent collaborator with director Ramon Menendez". Please also take note of WP:COI. Greenman (talk) 13:04, 7 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 12:02:44, 15 March 2023 for assistance on AfC submission by Nicholas Barker

Nicholas Barker (talk · contribs)
- Draft:IoT.nxt (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

I have added and formatted as best as I can. I would really like some help in getting the page live

Nicholas Barker (talk) 12:02, 15 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

下書き:サイバーセキュリティクラウド

初めまして。ドラフト;サイバーセキュリティクラウドにつきまして、グリーンマンさんのご指摘をいただき、出典サイトを追加いたしました。日本語版の英訳記事ですので、出典元は同じです。英語版の投稿は初めてですので、至らぬ点がございました、お教え頂ければ幸いです。よろしくお願いいたします。クレイトスⅣ世 (talk) 09:00, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Draft: Le Papa de simon declined again..

Hello, you have again declined my draft, 'Le Papa de Simon'. We are looking at a short story,seemingly one of the first Guy de Maupassant wrote. As to sourcing: Compare this article to what there is at FRWP, or DEWP. You will see that the sourcing situation is pretty similar. As we all know, sourcing is about reliable third-part references. Quick question thugh: What do you expect, given the story was published over 100 years ago? - Likely the best you'll find is a student of French literature published something in a literary magazine. If that student is doing a PhD, it will likely only cover a very small aspect. You cannot really compare a story that appeared in a newspaper/journal, and that's perhaps 30-50 lines long to a novella or book... Eptalon (talk) 08:03, 19 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Eptalon: each language project has its own guidelines and the English guidelines may be stricter. If something was published 100 years ago, and it is notable, there should far more than just the one reference available. Greenman (talk) 09:14, 19 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

That may be the case. I translated/wrote this based on FrWP and DeWp. I wont spend time in a library, trying to find sources. If FrWp doesn't have more soures they likely don't exist. Perhaps you'll find people interested in French language or literature, who'll extend it. I can leave a message on the FrWp page, but will otherwise be done with the subject. Eptalon (talk) 09:21, 19 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comment on 'Lizzy Rose' draft

hi you made a comment on 'Lizzy Rose': draft's "Comment: WP:External links need to be removed. Greenman (talk) 21:13, 21 March 2023 (UTC)" - thank you for your comment, I've now removed those links. Are you content to approve the page for publication? Chopschopschops (talk) 09:15, 22 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:1st House (astrology)

Hi Greenman, Thanks for your review. Please remove the Draft. Regards. Dinuraeditions — Preceding undated comment added 12:15, 23 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 23:47:06, 31 March 2023 for assistance on AfC submission by 84.164.192.240

84.164.192.240 (talk · contribs)
- Draft:Black Sheriff (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Rejected draft, conflict of interest. I made the page myself and i understand why this could be a conflict of interest but it is also obvious that we are a band that has been around for 16 years with more than 5 releases under i belt. I would really like to resolve this issue as I believe we deserve a page. Thanks Glen

84.164.192.240 (talk) 23:47, 31 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Help needed on Draft

Hi @Greenman, sorry to bother you, you seem like a busy person. Couple of months back you declined an article on Sanket Goel (Draft:Sanket Goel). I've worked on it and wanted to know if there is anything else I can do . Shashy 922 (talk) 10:29, 2 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Kunsulu Zakarya

Hi @Greenman, Please look at the article again, I have finalized it, added links. Thank you in advance! Agneta 92 (talk) 04:26, 10 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 08:44:58, 12 April 2023 for assistance on AfC submission by Loimo

Loimo (talk · contribs)
- Draft:Ponzichter (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Loimo (talk) 08:44, 12 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Ponzichter

Hi Greenman, I am not new to Wikipedia, I have plenty of experience in German Wikipedia. The article Ponzichter exists exactly in this version in the German Wikipedia. It has the same supporting documents there. It is known that the German Wikipedia is even stricter than the English one. Therefore, I do not understand your objection. Greeting, Loimo (talk) 08:44, 12 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Loimo:, Draft:Ponzichter was also tagged in February and again in March with concerns, and the links to the English Wikipedia guidelines should be clear to follow from there. Adding some inline citations would be a big help in both getting the submission reviewed more easily, and in getting it approved. Note that one of the two external links is a 404, which doesn't help with notability. Greenman (talk) 07:45, 15 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Greenman:, I overlooked before that the link no longer works. I have fixed that now. I also put the footnote. The main information is in the book cited and on the info board I recently attached to the article as an illustration. Please have a look at it now. Greetings--Loimo (talk) 09:55, 15 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Vladimir Dragosh

Good evening. I saw a warning about not writing to you about declined pages, but here is a strange case. Someone deleted from some sources the necessary information about Vladimir Dragosh and his students for the month that the draft was waiting for approval. I found new sources, including printed ones, and brought them. Link to an article from the book by the authoritative Moldovan musicologist Elena Uzun about Vladimir Dragosh, which I have given, with a translation of this article into English: https://ext-6309854.livejournal.com/318.html . The rest of the links are available on the Internet. Please look at the page again. Nichita1975 (talk) 15:21, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Adressing COI

Hello @Greenman. Thank you for your comment on my draft (Draft:Subtitlers' Association). You asked to address COI. Could you please advise what would be the best way to do this? Would the first point at Wikipedia:Conflict of interest#How to disclose a COI be okay for the purposes of the article? For the record: I'm a member of the association, but I don't get paid for writing or editing its article. Nyjja (talk) 17:29, 14 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Nyjja:, yes, Wikipedia:Conflict of interest#How to disclose a COI would be sufficient. I personally find #3 the clearest. Greenman (talk) 07:35, 15 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the tip! Done: User:Nyjja. If anything else is needed, please let me know. Nyjja (talk) 08:13, 15 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Draft: Deo Prasad

HI @Greenman

Thank you for taking the time to review the page which I had written.

The explanation you have provided for rejection 'purely promotional' is rather vague. Are you able to provide specific examples? I can see plenty of other comments to the same tune on this talk page, so I am just seeking some clarification so that I can correct the perceived mistakes.

Thank you for your help! 149.171.144.122 (talk) 23:22, 16 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 18:53:01, 23 April 2023 for assistance on AfC submission by Ssullivan446

Ssullivan446 (talk · contribs)
- Draft:1895 Films (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Greenman, I am responding to the notes that you provided on the 1895 Films. As a first-time submitter, I truly do appreciate your feedback and am approaching this with a learning mindset. I understand that the mission of Wikipedia is unbiased education, and I want to provide articles that meet that mission. Do you have specific examples you can share with me that illustrate how I have moved too much into a promotional voice? I completely understand that using links to the subject's owned and operated platforms is not good, and I can find other examples for those links. I was using the New Line Cinema and Stephen Spielberg pages as guidelines since this is about film production. I really appreciate your insights. Thank you.

Ssullivan446 (talk) 18:53, 23 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Need help

Hello. I would like to report an editor. Can you help me? Gondolabúrguer (talk) 17:47, 22 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Gondolabúrguer: see WP:BLOCKREQUESTS as a starting point. Greenman (talk) 18:22, 22 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Merci! Gondolabúrguer (talk) 18:31, 22 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Review and Corrections

Hey @Greenman thank you for your cooperations and great operations on Wikipedia. I am kindly seeking For your help, review, corrections in my draft article which is pending for your review or by team if possible.

It will be my pleasure if my article is accepted and I will always find ways to clean it and make it more suitable.

Draft:Mpiima Johnson

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Once again thanks brother! Mat baba (talk) 20:41, 28 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Azouaou Mammeri

I sourced both possible birth years since there is disagreement among sources about Mammeri's birth year (something that wasn't on the original French Wikipedia entry). Thank you for pointing out this. Abzeronow (talk) 16:45, 31 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

DRAFT: Tommaso Piccini

Hi Greenman, just seen that you disapproved my article regarding Silvio Salmoiraghi. I am a gastronome and while i was looking for info on Wikipedia I noticed that many many italian chef (exept Marchesi i would say based on my search) don't have info on them, that's why I decided to use my knowledge in the sector to try open pages and talk about them and their philosophy in the kitchen. You said that article and i quote: "appears to read more like an advertisement", can you please tell me and also suggest which parts i need to focus on? Since is my first time actually doing the work from the beginning i decided to describe the idea behind the person, can you understand? My purpose was not to sound too enthusiastic, can you please point me where i need to adapt test so that i can ask again for your approval? TommasoPiccini (talk) 10:19, 6 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @TommasoPiccini: phrases like "a testament to his culinary skills", or "his dedication and talent paid off" come across as promotional. The submission needs a thorough review for tone; take a look in particular at WP:Encyclopedic style and MOS:PUFFERY. Greenman (talk) 19:46, 6 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 16:59:23, 13 June 2023 for assistance on AfC submission by Ekpestar

Ekpestar (talk · contribs)
- Draft:Ubong Nse Thompson (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

I submitted three reliable sources following wikipedia guideline as can be cited in the references section, however I was surprised to see that greenman declined the page citing reliable sources.

I hope it can be properly checked and approved.

Ekpestar (talk) 16:59, 13 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: 2023 Currie Cup First Division has been accepted

2023 Currie Cup First Division, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. Most new articles start out as Stub-Class or Start-Class and then attain higher grades as they develop over time. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Draft:Zvi Landsman

Hello there, I read what you wrote here but still I need to write you since decline is an action that creates a whole new process for resubmitting at times... you wrote as a reason for decline "for example the source provided for most of the info in the biographical section makes no mention of most of what is stated." and this is not correct. The first source states the tree house and the second that he completed his degree with honors. I placed many reliable sources and also placed info regarding them on the talk page. I am well aware the draft was decline before you but all edits asked were done and this is an award wining director and the fact he is from I srael, doesnt mean he isnt worthy for a wikipedia page in English as well. Please revisit this and correct it if you can and willing... Thanks, Newlywo (talk) 09:44, 18 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Jessie Ennis

Hi, I know this isn't preferable but I don't know what I'm doing and I don't know if the comment I added to the page you're reviewing (Jessie Ennis) got through. I'm hoping to get further feedback/clarification on a source to use for birthdays or if that's necessary Mta1124 (talk) 21:25, 19 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

considering the draft

i thought the second draft would overwite the first , so please review the second one , and actually i just edited the 1st one , i dont know why was it made into a second one Amiralay1832 (talk) 13:25, 22 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Martin Schlegel (economist)

Hi Greenman, I've improved the draft a bit. Could you take a look if the issues have been fixed? Thanks Nobody (talk) 08:55, 23 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 22:22:18, 26 June 2023 for assistance on AfC submission by Dannyogolo

Dannyogolo (talk · contribs)
- Draft:Uchechukwu Nwafor (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

I am not sure what other "reliable sources" I need to support the submission. I will be glad if I am guided on the exact type of reliable sources that will make the submission be accepted.

Thanks in anticipation Dannyogolo (talk) 22:22, 26 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Dannyogolo: all statements need to be sourced. If you're unable to find sources, where do you get the information you added, for example the personal life? See also WP:COI. Greenman (talk) 07:42, 27 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

filimo draf

hello about your messege about draft;filimo i beleive i removed it

and what does copy editing mean? Taha Danesh (talk) 11:03, 1 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Taha Danesh: see WP:COPYEDIT, in this case there are spelling mistakes in some of the headers. Greenman (talk) 11:06, 1 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

ah thanks Taha Danesh (talk) 11:27, 1 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 03:49:52, 9 July 2023 for assistance on AfC submission by Jayneelyn

Jayneelyn (talk · contribs)
- Draft:Nathan Kelly (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hi, I would like to ask for assistance for my article. I have provided sources but apparently, it's not enough to support my article. I understand that there are few articles that can be found online, can you suggest ways on how to improve my article? Thank you in advance.

Jayneelyn (talk) 03:49, 9 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

LonelyPie Studio Draft

Hi Greenman.

I didn't mean to make this draft promotional. I can't really understand on what sources should I cite. Could you help me make that article "less promotional"? Best regards, Andus. AndusDEV (talk) 16:02, 10 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

New Page Reviewing

Hello, Greenman.

I've seen you editing recently and you seem like an experienced Wikipedia editor.
Would you please consider applying to become a New Page Reviewer? Reviewing/patrolling a page doesn't take much time but it requires a good understanding of Wikipedia policies and guidelines; currently Wikipedia needs experienced users at this task. But kindly read the tutorial before making your decision. Thanks. ❯❯❯ Raydann ^(Talk) 19:48, 17 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Aanal Kotak Draft

Hi Greenman,

Thank you for telling me the changes that i needed to make. I have made the necessary changes as suggested by you. Kindly check it out and help me out in case any further changes need to be made. Warm regards, Austin. AustinTravis27 (talk) 06:48, 4 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: 2023 FIDE Circuit has been accepted

2023 FIDE Circuit, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. This is a great rating for a new article, and places it among the top 21% of accepted submissions — kudos to you! You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Greenman (talk) 09:56, 17 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

some of you edits or the vavenda and Sotho-Tswana articles dont make sense. You are undoing work that impored the quality of a page, if find errors fix them dont undo the whole thing. EuKoketsolion (talk) 21:55, 22 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Draft on Wolfi Landstreicher

Hello Greenman, in your comment for declining the draft you listed my first source not mentioning the subject. In the first source Changing Suns Press you can find their short bibliography titled "Wolfi LandStreicher" on the subject under the part labeled "Killing King Abacus". Alpenflage (talk) 01:44, 4 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Alpenflage: thanks, I stand corrected. I probably missed it because it's spelt differently there, "Wolfi Landstreicher", as opposed to the spelling used in the title, Draft:Wolfi Landstricher, or the spelling used in the lead, "Wolfi Landsticher". The submission still falls short of the notability requirement though. Greenman (talk) 10:31, 4 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Draft：Liu Haowei

Hi Greenman, noticed your comment at Draft:Liu Haowei , could you let me know what should I do now? Thank you! Vanessa1014 (talk) 07:41, 6 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Vanessa1014: the comment was simply to alert you to WP:COI - there are instructions on that page on disclosure where appropriate. Greenman (talk) 18:25, 6 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Philippe A. De Backer

Hi @Greenman May I know how can I source the birth date? I also edited the framing and the content and avoided the promotional content. Askar888 (talk) 11:25, 9 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Askar888:, how do you know the date of birth if you don't have a source for it? If you don't have a source, the information needs to be removed. Greenman (talk) 14:30, 9 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Greenman I already added a resource with the birthdate, that's why I asked Askar888 (talk) 06:50, 11 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Hazem Elmashad

Hi @Greenman Why did he reject the player’s draft while he had obtained all the rights? Also, the player already has pages on the FIBA sites, and he is the current player in Zamalek, and he has obtained all the rights. Itache14 (talk) 13:57, 9 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Itache14: I don't understand what you mean by "he had obtained all the rights", but the submission was declined because there are unsourced statements, starting with the date of birth. Also, please make sure the notability guidelines are met. Greenman (talk) 14:35, 9 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Greenman My friend, this is the International Basketball Federation . Hazem elmashad on fiba , and it has the player’s date of birth that matches what I wrote. I hope you accept the page, as I did not write any wrong words to it at all. Itache14 (talk) 07:26, 12 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Draft: D3 Wrestling Programs

You rejected this list for lack of Notability, but other D3 Sports, D1 Wrestling, and D2 Wrestling all have their own lists, so I find it inconsistent to argue that D3 Wrestling is too niche to not have it's own Page. The personal bias of the Wikipedia reviewer should not be taken into account, only what is considered notable enough to have it's own list so far, and given that D3 Wrestling sits at the Crossroads of D3 Sports and College Wrestling, both things which are considered notable enough to have their own lists, it should also have it's own list.

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:List_of_NCAA_Division_III_Wrestling_Programs AddInfinty (talk) 10:28, 28 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

New Page

Hello. I just need to confirm one thing. You said i could just merge the page i created for the Carling Knockout Cup with the Telkom Knockout.Does this mean I could change the name of the Telkom knockout to Carling Knockout Cup? Greg (talk) 14:06, 11 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I see you've already done it. It should be fine - on WP:PAGEMOVE, the relevant clause is "The subject of the article has changed its name and the new name has come into majority use." It's maybe still a bit early, but the new name should become the common name very soon. Greenman (talk) 20:15, 11 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Review of a AfC review

Hello, I noticed that about a month ago you declined Draft:Saeb Sabry al-Safi for notability reasons. However, at the same time you said I cannot access the sources to review, however the submission needs substantial copyediting. I think it is a bit confusing to decline for notability if the sourcing has not been reviewed yet. Thanks, Ca ^{talk to me!} 11:14, 13 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Ca:, I think you have mistaken me for someone else. I left the comment, but the subsequent decline was not by me. Greenman (talk) 12:02, 13 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Oh, that was silly of me. Sorry for the bother! Ca ^{talk to me!} 12:41, 13 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

AfC

Thank you for reviewing and accepting Draft:Philipp Schindler. Much appreciated! I have also submitted Draft:GroupM and Draft:Guardant Health for review, if you're interested in taking a look. Your note at the top of this page recommends using AfC comments so all editors can follow along, which I've done in both cases. Whether or not you take a look at these other drafts, thanks again for your help! Inkian Jason (talk) 14:51, 18 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Future for Ukraine

Hi there. I edited https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Future_for_Ukraine_Charity_Foundation . Could you review this article? -- Niveus (talk) 13:48, 19 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:The baytree centre

Hi Greenman, you have declined my article due to the COI. Can you please explain to me what is non-neutral about my article in a kindly manner. Thank you. VolunteerKayla (talk) 15:20, 19 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Responded on Draft talk:The baytree centre. Greenman (talk) 19:21, 19 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 09:06:20, 25 October 2023 for assistance on AfC submission by Rosepolicarpio

Rosepolicarpio (talk · contribs)
- Draft:Joaquin Natividad (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

This is about my article on Joaquin Natividad which was declined last September 30th, 2023 for the following reason: "Tone issues not addressed since the previous decline." Is it possible to seek help by pointing out which sentences need re-wording for the tone issues to be addressed? Your assistance would be highly appreciated. Thank you.Rosepolicarpio (talk) 09:06, 25 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Declined Article

Hello Greenman, you declined my article @ Bala Sanusi Turaki. I hereby want to let you know that the article is well citated. If you will check the article log, you will understand that i have citated more than 50 independent sources which includes the name of the subject. He is a person of high prominence in the Federal Republic of Nigeria. Please kindly check and advise me on what to do next, because the article keeps getting rejected. The last comment was Citation Overkill which simply translates to "too many citations". Your comment notes that the citations provided dosent included the full name of the person. Please check properly, i wouldn't post an article without proper citation, Maybe the method of writing it is wrong, but kindly understand there are more than enough citations with his name. Brogonee (talk) 14:28, 30 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Responded at Wikipedia:Teahouse#Article_Review. Greenman (talk) 18:50, 30 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

November Articles for creation backlog drive

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Draft:Kamer Kaan Avdan

Hi, since you declined my draft i need to tell you something. I added as source YouTube, and a moderator told me that the reason why they put it is because they have probably slipped through the net and that it is rarely an acceptable style of reference. But he also said that a large majority of YouTube videos are not reliable sources and that videos posted on the official YouTube channels of reliable media outlets are accepted as reliable sources. 82.54.155.2 (talk) 08:40, 1 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Submission declined on 5 November 2023 by Greenman - Draft:Pisit Pitukcheewanont

Hello my friend Greenman, you have declined to publish my page of me, DR. Pisit Pitukcheewanont. Your reason was that there were too few citations but I see many published pages that have much fewer citations than mine. Can you please be more specific? I provided news and TV articles, over 70 published scientific papers.. Looking at other articles here with professor endocrinologist, medical research, they would not meet your requirements? Acllowe (talk) 22:21, 6 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Please read the guidelines. Entire sections are unsourced. You have not declared your WP:COI. See also WP:WHATABOUT. Greenman (talk) 06:28, 7 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Address the concerns

How do I address the previous concerns about the draft of Georgios Dritsakos as a retired Lieutenant General of the Hellenic Air Force before I resubmit to create a new article? How? It's hard to tell. 108.21.67.83 (talk) 14:30, 15 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

What is unclear about the comments left by the previous reviewer? They even gave the specific portion that was unsourced and needs sourcing. Greenman (talk) 08:28, 16 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Trevor Ombija Wikipedia page.

Hello Mr Greenman,

I have made the necessary changes you notified me earlier today in regards to Mr Ombija's Wikipedia page. I kindly ask you to review it and if you can return feedback on whether it is ready for publishing yet or not. Thank you

Regards,

Serrwinner

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Draft: South Africa Songs

hello greenman, you rejected my article because it

1. "lacks secondary sources"

when it almost looks exactly (basically the same) looks like the other articles part of the "Billboard Hits of the World" Chart collection, you denying my article which actually has more information than say South Korea Songs or Hong Kong Songs actually most of them yet they have articles yet they were accepted, I don't understand why South Africa Songs was rejected

2. "not relevant" or something like that,

how is that even relevant because the whole point is to add information that was not shared on Wikipedia before, who really cares about the Hits Of The World charts? people from their respective countries, i don't know why you rejected it, the reasons you gave also disqualified the already uploaded articles SaintAntoineLaurent (talk) 19:03, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @SaintAntoineLaurent: see Wikipedia:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS. The existence of other poorly-sourced articles does not mean more should be approved. Also note that the submission has been declined, not rejected. Declined means that it can be improved and resubmitted. Rejected means that the topic cannot be resubmitted. Greenman (talk) 19:16, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I have just viewed all record charts, literally excluding the US Hot 100 and UK Singles Chart all the articles don't have what you require of mine, I believe you are being too hard and asking for too much SaintAntoineLaurent (talk) 10:36, 14 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Regarding the draft:Mohamed Aarab

Hello, I hope you are well. I created this draft and added sources to it and modified them in a way that suits Wikipedia, but they are rejected. I added reliable and unpaid Arabic sources. I also tried to format the writing, but I do not know the reason for the shelf.Knowing that there are many articles in which there are no strong and inconsistent sources that have been approved, I hope to reconsider the article because I have reformulated the sources. Thank you for your efforts. Chamosuhdod (talk) 22:36, 18 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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I reworked this entry using models that are readily available. Brosi (talk) 01:06, 23 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Josei Tennō

Hiya! I would like to ask what do you mean the English on Draft:Josei Tennō is barely comprehensible? It seems fine to me. Please respond when you can, and I will go over it again to make sure it's ok. Thanks! Camillz (talk) 08:03, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Camillz: There are numerous examples throughout, such as "...all reigning monarchs were probably called Great King of Yamato (or queen), and not Josei Tennō, from Empress Jitō on, The were called Josei Tennō". Or "...blood was seen as impure and Soga-no-Iruka being killed Infront of the empress, and the empress being the most pure person (being Japan's leader) she had to abdicate". Greenman (talk) 10:22, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@GreenmanI think there was an error as it was fine when I edited it, I will be fixing it. But the first example "...all reigning monarchs were probably called Great King of Yamato (or queen), and not Josei Tennō, from Empress Jitō on, The were called Josei Tennō" you cut of the start which says "Before Emperor Tenji" although I think the problem is that it says Reigning monarchs. I will be fixing Camillz (talk) 14:46, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Greenman did this a bit ago, but grammar is fixed! There was a problem with something so I couldn't properly erase stuff or something like that. But did my best to fix Camillz (talk) 20:09, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Collateral Damage revertion

hi, when you reverted [edit] on Nodirbek Abdusattorov, you also reverted my edit adding the 2024 section & his victory at prague masters. i assume that that was unintentional, as your edit summary didn't explain why that would deserve revertion. i hope bringing it here instead of just editing it back in is the proper ettique as i am not very well versed in wikipedia. if you could edit it back in (so the version history looks nice) it would be much appreciated.Bloonpauper (talk) 03:31, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bloonpauper: Apologies, it was an over-revert, thanks for pointing it out. I've restored it, however, I've left out the part about him being fourth, as Wikipedia articles make use of the official FIDE rankings, not the live rankings. Once the April rankings are out, the details can be added. Greenman (talk) 06:48, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Request on 23:54:26, 1 April 2024 for assistance on AfC submission by Ebokwa

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- Draft:Digital Wellness Institute (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hi--I'm still new to editing. I think need to add a

The following Wikipedia contributor may be personally or professionally connected to the subject of this draft. Relevant policies and guidelines may include conflict of interest, autobiography, and neutral point of view.

[[User:{{{1}}}|{{{1}}}]] ([[User talk:{{{1}}}|talk]] · [[Special:Contribs/{{{1}}}|contribs]])

link as I am an unpaid academic advisor to this company. However, I'm not sure how to do this. Help?

Ebokwa (talk) 23:54, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Request for Restoration of Innocent Kawooya's Article

Hello Greenman, My name is Micheal Kaluba from Uganda and there is an article I worked on a few years ago titled Innocent Kawooya which was deleted. I am requesting that it is restored for me to work on it more as more sources about the subject have come up. Kind Regards Micheal Kaluba (talk) 06:45, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Micheal Kaluba: I am not an admin, so I can't restore the draft for you, but see Wikipedia:Requests for undeletion/G13 for the process to follow. Greenman (talk) 07:06, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you so much Greenman Micheal Kaluba (talk) 08:02, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Rejection of RJ Shook and confusion about Forbes

Wikipedia (WP:FORBESCON) is confusing Forbes Magazine with Forbes.com. It is incorrectly disallowing all stories related to Forbes because Forbes.com publishes some sponsored content. First, Forbes.com is NOT all sponsored content. Some of it is, and some of it is not. Other stories are exact replicas of what appears in the magazine, Forbes. For some reason, wikipedia is disallowing anything that is published that references Forbes. I am sourcing Forbes magazine. This content is produced and edited by journalists, not by advertisers and marketers. I would like to appeal that this content be allowed as a source. Can you help me? Thank you, JohnnyDeadline Johnnydeadline (talk) 21:38, 16 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Johnnydeadline: not all Forbes content is disallowed, there's also WP:FORBES. I suggest following up on the specific talk page if you think an editor has made a mistake confusing the two. Greenman (talk) 22:28, 16 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

How do I find the specific talk page. I am a bit confused by all this. I can't seem to get movement on a page. I have removed all the Forbes.com sources but it is being held back because of a previous edit, now being cited by new administrators who have viewed the re-submission. Johnnydeadline (talk) 21:49, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I have removed the Forbes.com content and based the sources only on Forbes Magazine. But the Wiki is still being rejected, in part, because of Forbes association with Forbes.com. I am not sure how to remove the blockade. Any advice you have I would be appreciated. What might be the specific talk page where I should followup? Thank you, Mark Johnnydeadline (talk) 22:07, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Some baklava for you!

GOOD! ^_^ Hsienching (talk) 08:44, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

True black hair is rare

Nosense is you based on sources that add dark brown hair and jet black hair in the same category Wish l (talk) 22:41, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

R.J. Shook: Sourcing of personal information

I am a bit confused by this statement: "See WP:BLP. Statements, starting with the date of birth, need to be sourced or removed. The entire personal life section is unsourced. Greenman (talk) 09:44, 13 April 2024 (UTC)" How would you like me to source someone's date of birth? From the hall of records? There are many, many published Wikis that do not source the hometown, college where the person attended, the place of birth. Please explain exactly how you would like me to add a primary source her to verify each of these. Thank you, Johnny Deadline. Johnnydeadline (talk) 21:56, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I wish the state of Florida had such a website that was publicly available. It does not. Johnnydeadline (talk) 22:25, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The source comes from R.J. Shook the subject of the Wiki. Shouldn't a primary source be sufficient? If I need to attribute it him, I am happy to do so. Thanks, Johnnydeadline (talk) 19:30, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Johnnydeadline: An editor saying that someone told them is not a source as far as Wikipedia is concerned, as it cannot be verified. A source has to be published. See Wikipedia:Verifiability. Greenman (talk) 21:00, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Johnnydeadline: I can't say where you should source the information from, but where do you get the information from if you don't have a source? People people add incorrect information to Wikipedia all the time, and if there's no source, there's no way to verify. That's why Wikipedia policy is very clear that material must be "attributed to a reliable, published source using an inline citation; material not meeting this standard may be removed". As for other articles, see WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS, in particular "From the logical perspective, this argument is an example of the logical fallacy known as the fallacy of relative privation (also known as "appeal to worse problems" or "not as bad as"). Greenman (talk) 08:05, 27 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Review and Corrections IJSA

Dear Greenman,

Thank you for writing. I have made improvements to the International Journal of Science Annals Is it possible to move the article to the main space at this point?

This article conforms to Wikipedia's publishing standards. The informational style and formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article is fully realized. The article contains a large number of reliable sources cited, including well-known scientometric databases and reputable international organizations such as the Committee on Publication Ethics (COPE), the Directory of Open Access Journals (DOAJ), and others.

This article presents only detailed, reliable, secondary and strictly independent sources. The Wikipedia website contains articles from major publishers with similar descriptions: Annals of the New York Academy of Sciences

There are also many industry journals with similar page descriptions, including

International Journal of Environmental Research and Public Health

Annals of Physics

Annals of Nuclear Energy

Annals of Surgical Oncology

Please take the time to become familiar with this information.

I would appreciate your recommendations and help. Thanks a lot for your work. Yurii Melnyk (talk) 21:04, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Vuyiswa Ramokgopa has been accepted

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White Zimbabweans

Hi Greenman,

I'm frankly at my wit's end with the unsourced population figures that keep appearing on White Zimbabweans. That article seems to go through prolonged periods of inactivity when nobody messes with the infobox, but then inevitably reliable sources get removed and unsourced numbers are added and re-added again. We're currently going through one of these cycles. Do you think we should appeal to have the page protected or semi-protected?

Thanks, Katangais (talk) 01:21, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Katangais: Yes, I think we should. Greenman (talk) 09:12, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

missing Note01 definition

Hi Greenman! I noticed in this edit, you added a new note, but without any text. Would you please take a look when you have a chance? Thanks, paul2520 💬 16:11, 17 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Review the sources for this article

Hello, can you review the sources of this article and confirm whether it is accepted or rejected? Draft:Draganov (musician) DRsabire (talk) 15:53, 21 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Australia v Wales attendance

Hey man, would you mind providing a source for the attendance figure you added for the Australia v Wales first test? Cheers. – Pee Jay 12:28, 6 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @PeeJay: I added this while watching the livestream of the game, but I've since found a reproducible source, and will add. Greenman (talk) 19:30, 6 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks mate, much appreciated. – Pee Jay 20:09, 6 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 19:34:25, 7 July 2024 for assistance on AfC submission by Dan Proudfoot

Dan Proudfoot (talk · contribs)
- Draft:Horst Kroll (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hello, Greenman, and thank you for your comment and offer of assistance. Please suggest how I should develop the context for the general reader who may be unfamiliar with the various forms of auto racing. What are examples of WIKILINKS that might develop the context? I don't expect you to do my work for me. . .I just want to get a feel for what's missing.

Dan Proudfoot (talk) 19:34, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

COi accusations

Now that I understand the site a little better, you wanna tell me why you referred me to see WP:COI on this draft? dxneo (talk) 15:00, 19 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Greenman, why do you like to tell editors at AfC to see COI? I just saw this on Draft:Die Fakulteit, and you've done it to me too. Please refrain from doing this. dxneo (talk) 23:25, 22 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Dxneo: WP:COI is an important Wikipedia policy, and therefore it's important new contributors are aware of it and adhere to it. Framing this topic as "COI accusations" is a misrepresentation. It's about raising awareness. A COI-editor who does not disclose any COI likely to be blocked. For the submission you refer to, Draft:Die Fakulteit, the single-purpose account, and completely over-the-top promotional language, mean they're quite possibly a COI editor, and may benefit from the notification. Greenman (talk) 11:08, 23 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Greenman, did I also seem like a COI editor when you also referred me to WP:COI cause I had already created multiple articles? As important of a guideline it is, it is not okay to "accuse" other editors with this COI thing. Take care. dxneo (talk) 11:27, 23 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Friendly reminder about the Royal Society for notability

Hello Greenman, and thanks for your work at AfC! This is just a note because I was going through some book/author articles and noticed this decline. I definitely agree that the sources at that time didn't show NAUTHOR or GNG, but I wanted to point out that there was sourcing for his election to the Royal Society of Literature, which satisfies WP:NACADEMIC criteria 3. It's an easy SNG to forget so I just wanted to put it on your radar for future academic articles. Thanks again for all your reviewing! ~ L 🌸 (talk) 23:23, 4 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Kit designs

Hello. Can you create kit designs for teams. I need the kit designs for the 2024-25 season of Kaizer Chiefs F.C. but i cannot create them. Greg (talk) 20:10, 19 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Help On Abandoned Draft Draft:Lobola Man

Hi @Greenman,

I hope you're doing well.

I wanted to follow up regarding the draft of Draft:Lobola Man. After receiving the last reviewer comment asking me to address the plot, I made the necessary revisions some time ago. I believe the reviewer may have overlooked checking back to review the updated draft.

Could you kindly assist in having it reviewed? Your help would be greatly appreciated 🙏🙏.

Thank you in advance! 🙂 Afro 📢Talk! 06:41, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Afrowriter: there's currently an up to two-month backlog on reviews, so be patient, and someone will eventually take a look at it. Greenman (talk) 09:29, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ok thanks for the response @Greenman 😁 Afro 📢Talk! 10:07, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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2025 Manila local elections

2025 Manila local elections is deleted G6. Please proceed with acceptance of the draft. -- Whpq (talk) 13:55, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

FYI, I went ahead and moved it. I wouldn't mind if someone "accepted" a draft I marked as under review for similar reasons, but I hope I haven't offended you by doing so. Courtesy ping for Whpq I dream of horses (Hoofprints) (Neigh at me) 18:13, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Alice Amin Siman Israel

Hello Greenman, Thank you for taking the time to review my draft and your observations.

I've corrected what you pointed out and I'm grateful for the feedback.

Could you please review it again please?

Thank you. Techxpertgirl (talk) 17:41, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Khadija Omar

Hello Greenman 💚 I already Sumbit the draft per WP:AFCSW, so that means This draft will be moved into a Article. without prevent vandalism 77.77.219.225 (talk) 07:17, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Template:COVID-19 pandemic data/Namibia medical cases chart has been nominated for deletion. You are invited to comment on the discussion at the entry on the Templates for discussion page. – Jonesey95 (talk) 23:27, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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