Wikipedia:Peer review/BZFlag/archive1
I did a lot of work on it (most everything on that page is from me) and am trying to reach Featured Article status. I have no particular sections that I want read, but just any suggestions, corrections, etc. about any parts would be greatly appreciated. Spelling and grammar were checked using Microsoft Works on Windows XP, so I am 99% sure everything is good as for spelling. --Lan56 07:24, Jan 30, 2005 (UTC)
- Well, for starters I'd expand the lead section. I recently expanded the lead section of Bolt Thrower, that might give you a few ideas. - Ta bu shi da yu 12:12, 30 Jan 2005 (UTC)
- I lengthened the lead section a bit. I don't have much to put there, but I did make it look a bit longer. Thanks for the tip! --Lan56 00:33, Feb 2, 2005 (UTC)
- Consider processing the article with a spellchecker, there are some spelling mistakes (e.g. Rogue, Theif and so on.) Squash 04:55, 5 Feb 2005 (UTC)
- I lengthened the lead section a bit. I don't have much to put there, but I did make it look a bit longer. Thanks for the tip! --Lan56 00:33, Feb 2, 2005 (UTC)