User talk:Peak/Preamble
The first sentence of an article generally gives a summary indication of what the article sets out to establish. E.g., Jumping spiders are spiders that capture their prey by approaching fairly near and then springing upon them." The first sentence of the Preamble does not do that, and it would cost the reader some time and frustration to discover a main thread.
[P0M:] The criterion: " a group having common ancestors" is unclear.
[P0M:] If it means "a group having only common ancestors" it would refer only to the children of a single set of parents.
[P0M:] If it means "a group having some common ancestors" it would presumably be an extremely large group if family lines were traced back far enough.
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